GoofballPaul's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Yeehaw]

Neat character art, but with a black background making out the hair and other black/very dark elements becomes near-impossible, that hold this piece back a lot.

frazamatron responds:

fair, this was made for Twitter so I'll keep it in mind in future

[Possessed Pals]

I like your colour choices a lot, and Darcy's lineart is very clean, but Luz/the collector looks very off... Her lineart is a lot shakier, the cape lacks form, the anatomy is off... But still, I see some good foundation here! ^0^

murphEXE responds:

Thanks! I appreciate the feedback!

[Huntress Pixelart!]

I'd say it's lacking some contrast, but I love the dynamic pose and the colours are very pleasing, at least on their own, the shapes of the character are also very well done and chosen! ^0^

BraixyBrat responds:

Thank you very much for the insight and such! It's much appreciated. :o
I'll work on contrast the next time I do something like this!

[Battle Roy!]

I like the posing of this one, and how voluminous and 3 dimensional you got Roy's design to be! :D

Kunaigirl responds:

Thank you so much!

[Cyber City]

I like this a lot! The robot is a bit hard to make out though, its surroundings are very crowded and could have more contrast. Very nice artwork otherwise! :D

schllott responds:

Ty! Oh shoot yeah, I appreciate the feedback!

[Amphibia :D]

I like your lineart style, the specific darker shades used for the lineart are very well chosen I'd say :D

Though the line width could be more consistent, that'd be a huge plus (each individual line is consistent with itself, I mean consistency between 2 separate lines) :S

Good stuff in general, also I've checked your other artworks and they're pretty neat as well, keep it up! \(^0^)/

Edit: Forgot to say I love how you drew Hop Pop on Bessie heheh ^^

SuperAxDs responds:

Glad you liked it!
I'll see how the more consistent outlines look for future drawings and thanks so much for the feedback! :D