GoofballPaul's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The X Parasite Cometh]

ngl I don't like the base version much, but I LOVE the "glithy" version!

[MONSTER COLLECTING GAME ™]

I like those collectable monster designs a lot! :O

[Possessed Pals]

I like your colour choices a lot, and Darcy's lineart is very clean, but Luz/the collector looks very off... Her lineart is a lot shakier, the cape lacks form, the anatomy is off... But still, I see some good foundation here! ^0^

murphEXE responds:

Thanks! I appreciate the feedback!

[Huntress Pixelart!]

I'd say it's lacking some contrast, but I love the dynamic pose and the colours are very pleasing, at least on their own, the shapes of the character are also very well done and chosen! ^0^

BraixyBrat responds:

Thank you very much for the insight and such! It's much appreciated. :o
I'll work on contrast the next time I do something like this!

[Ragtag dog]

Friend shaped friend colored friend everything :)

[Battle Roy!]

I like the posing of this one, and how voluminous and 3 dimensional you got Roy's design to be! :D

Kunaigirl responds:

Thank you so much!

[Cyber City]

I like this a lot! The robot is a bit hard to make out though, its surroundings are very crowded and could have more contrast. Very nice artwork otherwise! :D

schllott responds:

Ty! Oh shoot yeah, I appreciate the feedback!

[Young Roquefort]

I really like the anatomy and perspective on this one! The folds and creases on the pants are also noteworthy! ^0^

[Heekapoo wearing cheer leader suit]

The lineart, pose, anatomy aren't half bad, but the shading is murky, poorly executed, and makes the good basis look ugly x_x

It's a real shame because lighting aside there's some good foundation here! I recommend trying out clipping the shading layer to the colour layer, so it doesn't spill over, and trying out using colorful shading instead of black, perhaps on multiply blend mode.

I've seen some of your other art posts and this one shows an improvement in anatomy, do not let my low score detract you from continuing to try, you're on good track! ^0^ <3

[Amphibia :D]

I like your lineart style, the specific darker shades used for the lineart are very well chosen I'd say :D

Though the line width could be more consistent, that'd be a huge plus (each individual line is consistent with itself, I mean consistency between 2 separate lines) :S

Good stuff in general, also I've checked your other artworks and they're pretty neat as well, keep it up! \(^0^)/

Edit: Forgot to say I love how you drew Hop Pop on Bessie heheh ^^

SuperAxDs responds:

Glad you liked it!
I'll see how the more consistent outlines look for future drawings and thanks so much for the feedback! :D